27 September, 2009

Challenge 003: Carlos vs Buyu

When a native tribesman discovers the unconscious body of a white man, water isn't the only thirst...

Who will win between Carlos and Buyu? Use the comments to place your bet before the fight is published!

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3 comments:

Jonno said...

Hot hot hot! What's the scenario? Love how you're coming up with unexpected scenarios for your first two stories instead of just plain fighting. It's hard to pick a winner without knowing the set up though. My money's on Carlos. He looks heaps stronger, but it depends on the story. Perhaps you can let us know the setup in advance?

Rassle Writer! said...

Good point, Jonno. I'll add the scenario to this challenge and from now on. Thanks for the feedback.

Anonymous said...

Well constructed and clever, as you keep the reader guessing. Nice to see that you can create a story without the f-word and such. Wouldn't object to your fleshing out the background as to how Carlos got to the place where he was found, and how he was injured.